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Event start time:Thu Jan 26 08:06:19 2006
Event end time:Tue Jan 31 14:09:40 2006


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janfields Join us this afternoon in the AUDITORIUM-Scheduled Events Room for an "Open Forum" with Web Editor Jan Fields. A full-time freelance writers for over 20 years, I have dozens of magazine articles and stories, as well as other mystery publications...wwwwooooo. I welcome your questions on time management, getting started, writer's block, marketing, writing rights, writing earnings, or anything else you'd like to discuss. Bring your QUESTIONS to this open forum—in five minutes.
janfields The Tuesday afternoon "Open Forum" will begin promptly at 3 Atlantic/CANADA, 2 p.m. Eastern, 1 p.m. Central, Noon Mountain, and 11 am Pacific. While you wait for the "Open Forum" to start, if you are in the AUDITORIUM, feel free to use your ASK A QUESTION button RIGHT BETWEEN THE YELLOW “MAP” AND THE RED QUESTION MARK IN ICHAT to post some questions for the discussion group—two minutes from now.
janfields Good afternoon! Welcome to this Tuesday afternoon’s "Open Forum" session. I'm your moderator, Jan Fields, Web Editor. I'm back for an informal time of answering any questions you might like to ask, on any subject. So feel free to ask what's on your mind--and I’ll tell you what’s on mine! First, please read these announcements, then we’ll get started….
janfields IMPORTANT INSTRUCTIONS: Send questions you'd like answered or discussed by using your "Ask a Question" icon/button. (It looks like a thought bubble icon, RIGHT NEXT TO THE RED QUESTION MARK.) I will post the questions one at a time in the chat room and do our best to answer them. Also note: If you want to make it possible to ask the longest question you can, first type “/ask” (without the quotation marks), then leave one space after the end of “ask”, then type as many characters of your question as you can. If your question is not complete, send the second part next, then if necessary the third, etc…
janfields WARNING: If you don't post anything at all, SOME of you will be bounced off the system in 15 minutes. TO PREVENT THIS, type something (either a question to the moderator or even a private message) every 15 minutes to stay active and remain online. Some folks just type a period and hit enter...that works too. But try not to post chit-chat, please, it can confuse some of your fellow chat-sters.
janfields Good Afternoon Writerfolk...I am so happy to see y'all through the power of being sort of in two places at once.
janfields Pay no attention to the jan behind the curtain.
janfields Today we've got great questions and I'm raring to go...
janfields Yes...so many things is writing are just like OZ, caq
janfields But...unfortunately I can be more of a scarecrow than the wizard
janfields High Hopes asks In light of increasing postal costs and overworked/stressed out editors, do you feel it is necessary to send a "thank you" for every submission-accepted or rejected? How do editors feel about this policy?
janfields Okay...here is where I admit that I have little or no manners...
janfields I almost never send thank you notes...
janfields unless an editor has gone well out of her way, which sometimes they do...
janfields because the editors I've met are wonderful over-worked sweethearts...
janfields So unless an editor gives me a lot of revision suggestions or a great tip on another market
janfields I don't think folks who reject me.
janfields I refrain from calling them names under my breath...I figure that's nice.
janfields I do thank editors during the revision process for all their work in helping my work be it's best.
janfields And sometimes I will thank an editor for something WHEN I SEND THE NEXT submission.
janfields Otherwise...no thank yous from me.
janfields But it's always nice to thank an editor who clearly went out of her way for you.
casey an editor at a conference said she doesn't like to receive those notes because she doesn't have the time to read them
janfields Yup...you really don't want to add to an editor's workday...but thanking an editor for the past when sending the NEW sub...well, that can't hurt.
janfields And when you're in the revision process...you're corresponding a lot...so thanks don't add to the burden.
caq Isn't writing a job? Do you send employers thank you's for your paychecks? I just am confused as to why the feeling is there to say "thank you", in light of the fact that it is a business arrangement, unless the siturations you just stated.
janfields Right...I'm afraid that's pretty much how I see it.
janfields I try always to be cordial though because I respect what editor's do...but I thank those who clearly go beyond the job.
janfields It's just that mostly they don't have time to go "beyond the job" ...it's a tough job time-wise.
janfields Hey, someone has good news...I love good news.
dell I have good news, Jan. For the first time, I sold one of my ICL assignments. Last week, Wee Ones accepted my assign 3 (on the praying mantis) for 2007 July/Aug issue. I took it out, tweaked it a bit, and it sold!
janfields THAT IS FANTASTIC.
janfields I'm so glad for you dell.
janfields And Wee Ones is such a nifty market...the editor is just a sweetie.
janfields Go Dell, go Dell...way to sell it, way to sell it. <-- I'm so not an adult.
marys great news dell
dell And Jennifer Reed, the Wee Ones editor, was so sweet in her comments. She even checked out my web site!
janfields Yeah...she's a dear..and AN ICL INSTRUCTOR...go instructors...
vettemom Can we clone Wee Ones editor?
janfields Actually a lot of editors are sweeties...the Moo Cow editor is just a doll.
janfields And I loved the Cricket staff...alas, for them.
janfields And I think Highlights folks are hired on the basis of being sweet.
janfields They are just a teensy bit overworked...but if you see them at conferences, TOTALLY say hi.
janfields They are very nice folks.
jodyjl I'll add on to Dell's news. I sold an article to Wee Ones last week as well. I think Jennifer is busy, busy!
janfields Well, GO Jody...cool.
janfields I would sing my Go Jody song but my daughter's rabbit is looking at me funny.
janfields Ah, I see I have confused someone...I shall attempt to rectify
dell Jan, what is 'Moo Cow?' I know there's a Moo Press, small book publisher out of Westchester, NY.
janfields Moo Cow Fan Club is a "newish" nonfiction market
janfields They take queries and assign pieces.
janfields Very nice folks to work with...but only a quarterly.
janfields Eqqamy...the ask button isn't available in...hmmm...html chat I think.
janfields You can private message to pass on your question to someone to post for you.
janfields Oh...one more Jody cheer.
marys great Jody
janfields Now...more questions.
kswcolorado Have you heard anything about where the "displaced" Carus
kswcolorado editors are going to end up? New jobs, new markets?
janfields I know Julia Messina opened a bookstore.
janfields And Paula Morrow is hanging out her own editing shingle.
janfields Some of the folks are freelance editing.
janfields I haven't heard of anyone landing at a magazine yet.
jobranham1964 is a website important /a plus - in these computerized days?
janfields Yes and no
janfields I have a website...actually I have several
janfields And I have gotten work offers THROUGH my website
janfields It makes a handy place to contact you
janfields Or read more about you.
janfields But it's a time consumer
janfields And it can be expensive.
janfields Don't make one at the expense of your writing time/money
janfields But if your career is moving along, you might want to think about having one.
janfields As I HAVE been offered work-for-hire educational and package work through my website.
eggamy is the Cerus group closing?
janfields Carus? AKA Cricket group is not closing...they just moved the office
janfields To put the "bugs" under the same roof with ASK and CLICK
janfields Unfortunately that meant any editor who didn't want to move to Chicago
janfields Got removed.
janfields Not so nice.
janfields But the magazines are fine...and they are still collecting subs at the old address.
janfields All pieces under contract are safe and will be published.
janfields Though response times may be slower than usual.
casey mel gave us your blog address. can you give it again? I enjoyed reading it.
janfields Sure...http://www.livejournal.com/users/cute_n_cranky/
janfields It's not business related though
janfields Just me running my mouth
janfields But you can see how cute my kid is :-)
spotslover2 What is your URL, Jan? So we can see what an affective website looks like. Thanks, Sarah.
janfields Well...I have a site at http://www.janfields.com
janfields But it's static
janfields You should NEVER let your site grow static and old
janfields Web content needs to be dynamic and mine USED to be
janfields But I have too many irons in the fire.
janfields I also have http://www.kidmagwriters.com
janfields Which updates monthly -- it's a market oriented web magazine though
janfields Not a personal site
dell When I contact nursery schools about doing pajama parties/book signings, or schools about doing school visits, I believe I look more preofessional now that I can refer them to my web site.
janfields Yes, web sites are PERFECT for advertising ANY outside stuff you do
janfields Like school visits
janfields And..by the way...you can do school visits as a magazine writer.
janfields I know magazine writers who do them...and kids know the magazines
janfields Just like they know the books.
janfields They still thank you're cool
dell preofessional??? lol, I meant professional
janfields That's okay...I can just about half spell myself.
janfields Especially in chat
janfields Kate asked: I know I'm not supposed to send another story to a magazine that
under consideration, but what about magazines
Pockets or Hopscotch? What if I've
theme due in March, and I have another that
in April? I probably won't have heard back yet
send the second one anyway
janfields Okay...here's the thinking behind not sending more than one piece to a magazine...
janfields You don't want to compete with yourself...
janfields BUT if you're sending to two different themes...
janfields Or sending material for vastly different seasons...
janfields Or sending very different kinds of material...
janfields You can send more than one thing to one magazine -- I do it all the time...but...
janfields I send them in separate envelopes with cover letters expressly for THAT submission.
janfields When I'm subbing I want the editor's eyes totally on THAT sub...so I send separately in mailing
janfields But I don't wait to hear back to send something else as long as it's not likely to be competing for the magazine slot filled by the first piece.
janfields HighHopes: Do you know if Wee Ones still accepts a rebus? I didn't see it listed on their new guidelines. If so, do they still require the author to provide the pictures?
janfields Yes, Wee Ones accepts rebuses...but you MUST send the graphics for it.
janfields If you can't do the graphics..you can sometimes find folks who can.
janfields Say...high school art students...who would LOVE to do it just for the art credit
janfields Which Jennifer would happily give them.
janfields Nerakp asks: I was reading the guidelines for Learning Through History the other day. They buy all rights, including copyright. I know what "all rights" means, but what does it mean if they buy a copyright?

janfields Oh...wait...freckles, a rebus is a story...
janfields where part of the text is replaced by pictures
janfields So a sentence might say; Jane loved her cat
janfields But in the magazine, the words Jane and Cat would be replaced by graphics
janfields Or would have graphics on the page right with the word.
janfields Okay..back to Nerakp's question about ALL RIGHTS.
janfields All rights automatically means you are agreeing to transfer the copyright to the magazine.
janfields Learning Through History just added it to the guidelines to make that clear.
janfields Because you've sold ALL RIGHTS, you cannot resell the piece.
janfields You cannot quote from it with attribution...and if you quote from it, you must not quote over ...say 10% of the total content.
janfields You cannot simply rework it a bit and sell it again.
janfields Because that would be a derivative work and only the copyright holder has the right to a derivtive work
janfields To sell something related to the ALL RIGHTS piece, you would have to make it fundamentally different so the two do not seem directly related.
janfields Basically, if you sell ALL RIGHTS, you need to walk away from the piece...so you need to decide if you're comfortable with that before making the sale.
janfields Personally, I only see all rights if
janfields 1. I get paid A LOT
janfields 2. I really really really want a specific clip
janfields 3. I don't care about the piece and know I don't want to use anything in it.
janfields That's about as far as I can explain...
casey Is using the word mystery, clue, or secret, etc. in a title old stuff now? Or are they still being used?
janfields Magazines love mysteries...book publishers sort of love mysteries.
janfields Kids adore mysteries.
janfields And they still glom onto words like "mystery" or "clue" or "secret"
janfields Not as much as "spy" or "extreme" or "super" but still pretty hard.
janfields So if you've got a mystery...sure, slip a good "mystery" word in.
janfields The worst that happens is an editor changes it.
janfields But it'll identify what you've done...and editors that love mystery will be glad.
eggamy are the Cerus group addresses right in the current Mag market from ICL?
janfields Carus...yes, you can send to that address and I have been told that it will get to the Cricket mag group just fine.
janfields They are keeping mail coming through the Peru address until they have all the new offices in order.
janfields There is also a Chicago address...the one used for "Ask" and "Click" in guides and it works also.
janfields Right now, the main key is patience because they WILL be slow in response time.
janfields Lizziegirl asks: What is slant?

janfields Slant means the particular slice of a topic that you are writing nonfiction about.
janfields For example: Elephants is a topic...but no one wants a general piece on elephants.
janfields Because it is going to be encylopedic..it can't help it.
janfields But if you interview the lady who runs the elephant "retirement" home in Tenn...then that's a slant.
janfields If you interview the guy who got stomped by an elephant but fought to keep the elephant from being "put down."
janfields That's a slant
janfields If you research why elephants are endangered...that's a slant
janfields If you look at elephant mythology -- that's a slant.
janfields Think of it as a slice
janfields The most interesting slice you can find
janfields One that fills the word count and amazes the reader.
vettemom What makes Cricket and Highlight so good as a mag?
vettemom compared to othere, year after year?
janfields One is editorial oversight...they have always had skilled editors
janfields And LOTS of submissions
janfields So they can pick from the very best.
janfields Another is money...they can invest in the look of the magazine
janfields And again...they can invest in taking the time needed for the editorial process.
janfields And they have HUGE readerships so writers like to be published in them.
janfields After all...how likely are we to sell 1,000,000 copies of our book?
janfields But a story in Highlights will reach 1,000,000 kids.
janfields Who wouldn't want that?
janfields bechu asks: Is it in order and polite to include a brief, brief,
for writing

janfields Most of the time, contest entries don't need cover letters...unless it's requested in the guidelines.
janfields But I can't seem to do ANYTHING without a cover letter
janfields So sometimes I handwrite (neatly) a nice cover on a large sticky note and put it on my contest entries.
janfields Makes me feel better.
janfields And no one will ever hate you for sending a cover.
vettemom Okay, Jan I'm sold! Thanks..Cricket here I come!!!
janfields You go, girl
janfields By the way, lots of folks are scared of hand writing stuff.
janfields Honestly...editors do not care if you handwrite your envelopes
janfields They won't even notice
janfields If you send a sub that doesn't need a cover but add a handwritten stickie...they won't be bothered by that.
janfields They don't even mind if you do one or two small handwritten corrections on a manuscript.
janfields Just be very clear...if you write like my doctor...get your kid to do it for you :-)
janfields Kimber...I see your question about FACES....and I don't know the answer so I'll find out and put it in the newsletter for Monday.
caq Some contests state in the entry submissions to follow the instrucitons to a "T" and if you don't , they will not be considered. So if they say that and they do NOT want a cover letter, I don't htink I would send anthing but what they ask for. Wouldn't that be wiser?
janfields I always try to follow guidelines, but if you put a stickie on it...they'll just take it off before they distribute it to the judges.
janfields They won't hate you.
janfields They save that for the folks who staple when they said paperclip.
janfields Or slather their name on the entry when they clearly said not to.
janfields Sometimes...we just gotta rebel...just always think -- am I making the receiver's job harder?
janfields Cause if you are...they might not hate you...but they will make little grrrr sounds.
janfields Caq asks: How much attention should a writer pay to things like spelling, grammar, and punctuation before submitting a piece for critique?
janfields I think it's ALWAYS a good idea to be aware of your spelling, grammar, and punctuation.
janfields I see a lot of newer writers who send stuff to editors with lots of those kinds of errors
janfields And they figure...if my story is good enough, they'll get over this
janfields They won't.
janfields And it's HEALTHY for you to learn to be anal about spelling/grammar/punctuation
janfields So even when you're exhanging stuff for crits with friends...it's a good idea to take
janfields the time to edit
janfields for the little errors.
janfields Because it will let your crit group concentrate on the Story, etc...rather than fixating on the typoes
janfields I personally, am TYPO QUEEN...I have a crown somewhere to prove it.
janfields So I check, double check, and check again.
janfields And I still make mistakes.
janfields But I always want to put my best writing foot forward...because my work is such an important part of me.
marys How do we find such wonderful critics ?
janfields I found mine accidentally.
janfields And that's how many folks find theirs.
janfields It helps if you read a lot of writing discussion boards...and make friends.
janfields Offer to exchange work...and don't take it personally if they already have crit buddies.
janfields Eventually you'll find a place to click.
janfields It took me THREE writing groups before I clicked...
janfields The first treated me like E.F.Hutton..when I talked...an awefilled hush fell over the room.
janfields Eeeek
janfields The second thought I was too "corrective" and wanted only supportive crits...so we had a style clash.
janfields But the third was "just right" and so far I haven't broken them.
caq The work is not only an important part of you, but also a relfection of your ability to pay attention to details that matter. It shows our communication skills or lack of.
janfields I totally agree...it's hard to communicate clearly when your reader is puzzling out your mistakes.
janfields I once sent an email to an editor with whom I was working...
janfields Telling her that I was ready to send the whole manuscript.
janfields Unfortunately, I said: "I'm ready to send the whore manuscript."
janfields To this day, she gives me grief when she sees me.
janfields Thankfully, she still loves me, but you can see that wouldn't make a great FIRST impression.
janfields babyfish asks: Do you have to get permission to write a story about an incident
you know
janfields It depends
janfields If you're writing fiction and you change it substantially...sure...
janfields If it's only one small slice of your story and you change it some...sure...
janfields If you're writing nonfiction...not really.
janfields You can run into invasion of privacy issues if someone recognizes their incident...
janfields And feels you're revealing things about them publically...
janfields And, of course, you never want to cut in on another writer's story turf...so I don't "borrow" life events from writers.
janfields Usually
caq if you change it substantially, it is not that story anymore, so why the permission? Do the tv stories who say, "Taken from a true event" or "The names have been changed," get permission?
janfields If the person's friends and family would relate the story TO the friend...
janfields And it might cause him/her embarassment
janfields Then you've got an invasion of privacy issue.
janfields One that has gone against writer's before.
janfields And against publishers/tv companies/newspapers...blah, blah
janfields But if you change it so much that the friends of your friend would no longer associate it with him
janfields And he wouldn't recognize it as being about him
janfields Then you're fine
janfields I'm afraid it's 3 pm...so that's about all folks.
janfields The time sure flies here.
janfields Thank y'all for coming
janfields And for sending such great questions
janfields I know I missed a bunch but watch for the Monday newsletter

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