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Event start time: Tue Oct 18 13:59:55 2005
Event end time: Tue Oct 18 15:06:32 2005


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mel boring I'm going to START with the Word of the Forum today...'
mel boring because it IS a puzzler. It is BRITISH not AMERICAN English is the only clue I'll give for now....
mel boring The word is "snoggle." Does ANYone know it? Send me your answer in a question submission, please!
mel boring MUCH GOOD NEWS from Patricia LoCascio:
children's writing course last December. In this first year of professional writing, I've been published in KEYS FOR KIDS (July) and TEACH KIDS! (Sept.) Today I received the Dec. issue of KIDS ZONE magazine which includes my 10th assignment for the course (a how -to craft) and a nonfiction piece on squash (the food.) My article on lacrosse (Assignment 9) will be appearing in an upcoming issue of BOYS' QUEST. I thank the Institute for the excellent class and praise the Lord for opening the doors.


mel boring HUGE CONGRATULATIONS, Patricia!!!...
mel boring To have graduated from the ICL course less than a year ago...
mel boring and to have sold--let me count--FOUR pieces already is PHENOMENAL!!!...
mel boring CONGRATULATIONS, and THANKS for letting us share the joy of your publication!
mel boring Lisa Gavin sent us this excellent GOOD NEWS: I entered SCBWI's latest on-line contest and received Runner-Up! The challenge was to write an intriguing query letter introducing a book that is already a popular children's book as if you were the author. I selected ENCYCLOPEDIA BROWN, BOY DETECTIVE. My entry will be posted on their web site in a couple of days. Lisa's very FIRST line of her excellent review was: "He's like a complete library walking around in sneakers." The WRITE STUFF!!!
mel boring I read Lisa's entry, and it was EXCELLENT!...
mel boring As I quoted, I LOVED her very first line! CONGRATULATIONS, Lisa, from all of us here!...
mel boring And MANY HAPPY RETURNS to you!
mel boring Chris Weigand sent this double GOOD NEWS: Today I recieved in the mail a newsletter that had an article of mine printed in it. This is my first print (not online) publication and I was taken completely by suprise. I knew they were considering the article but had no clue that they had accepted it. Later
month I will also see my second article in print. It is one that was accepted about a year ago and I have been waiting for it to be published. The first article is in a newsletter entitled "Together," a Mennonite publication. The second will be in "Once Upon a Time" a magazine for Children's writers and illustrators. Thanks and God Bless

mel boring DOUBLE CONGRATULATIONS to you, Chris!!...
mel boring Chris had been MUCH published online, and now these PRINT publications!!!...
mel boring We are all HAPPY for you, Chris. And in OUAT
mel boring you are sharing a spotlight with some VERY experienced authors, such as Jane Yolen, who has been published in Once Upon A Time (OUAT). WAY TO GO!
mel boring Sonya sent this GOOD NEWS: I just sold one of my ICL article assignments to Fun For Kidz. It's entitled "Kindergarten Inventor" and will run (in about 4 years!) in the

mel boring It is SO ESPECIALLY satisfying to see an ICL grad or student sell what they wrote for their assignments!...
mel boring HEARTY CONGRATULATIONS, Sonya!!! I know you are MUCH published, and "Kindergarten Inventor" sounds VERY INTRIGUING to me!
mel boring Here is MORE GOOD NEWS just in and fresh:...
dell Mel, I'm doing my very first book signing tonight. If anyone lives in the Kingston, NY area, I'll be at their B&N store from 7-9 . Thanks to everyone who chatted with me this afternoon and made recommendations on what kind of candy to fill my bowl with! Gotta get people to my table, right?!
mel boring CONGRATULATIONS to you, dell!!!...
mel boring How I wish I WAS near Kingston, NY, I'd sure be there!...
mel boring Barnes and Noble makes a very CLASSY book signing, friend!...
mel boring Are we allowed to ask what kind of candy you decided on? YUMMY--you know me and my tummy!
mel boring I am IMPRESSED, folks, TWO people know what "snoggle" means!!!...
susan ralston J.K. Rowling used it in last H.P. book = kissing, cuddling
wenscritters "snoggle" - a carress involving a kiss (snuggle
mel boring RIGHT you BOTH are! J.K. Rowling used the word in her Harry Potter and the Half-Blood Prince....
mel boring It is a VERY interesting word, especially because now,...
mel boring Harry Potter is growing up--16, I believe--so he and his crowd are getting into "snoggling," kissing....
mel boring BRIGHT you ARE, susan ralston and wenscritters!!!
dell Mel, we decided on individually wrapped hard candy, like mints
mel boring Oh YUMMERS!!! I'd sure be there if I could, ESPECIALLY for mints, dell!!!...
mel boring We ALL wish you the VERY BEST of booksigning tonight, friend!!!
mel boring BV needs to know: I have submitted to half a dozen magazines with different manuscripts, but have received only rejection letters in response. I am still waiting to hear back from DIG. It has been 3 months--could I send a follow-up letter?
mel boring I got out my 2006 CHILDREN'S WRITER'S & ILLUSTRATOR'S MARKET to answer this question...
mel boring What DIG does, like MANY of the COBBLESTONE/CARUS magazines, is to require quite an...
mel boring extensive submission package: A cover letter with details about the subject and word length,...
mel boring PLUS a detailed ONE-PAGE outline explaining the informatiion to be presented,...
mel boring POLUS a BIBLIOGRAPHY of materials the author intends to use in preparing the article....
mel boring So, BV, if your query did not contain that complete package, that MIGHT be why you haven't heard from DIG.....
mel boring So what I would suggest is for you to send DIG a postcard inquiring about your manuscript, BV,...
mel boring and they might reply by telling you what part(s) you didn't include with your query....
mel boring A query letter is usually just that, a letter. But DIG is quite extensive in their requirements.
mel boring Because of many writers' expressed interest in poetry, and the difficulty in getting it published, I wanted to let you know about a fun Web Site, that of Joe Sottile, "Silly Sottile," at: http://www.consideration.org/sottile/
Site, for both kids and teachers. Take a look sometime at how Joe uses poetry on his Web Site
mel boring By the way, Frank Ball, our Technician for the Web Site...
mel boring told me that because of a recent UPDATE for some WINDOWS programs (like XP)...
mel boring our chat software might not function as before....
mel boring So if you run into that difficulty, Frank recommends coming into the chat room...
mel boring in JAVA LITE or HTML, which should solve any problems you might have.
mel boring Here is some GOOD NEWS so NEW that I haven't even read the article yet!...
casey Our own ccollier (as in Christine Collier) had a great article in Children's Writer which just came out.
mel boring CONGRATULATIONS, Christine!!! I can't wait now to get that issue of the CHILDREN'S WRITER to read your article!...
mel boring Christine is WELL published, and has published articles on our Web Site here! WAY TO WRITE RIGHT, CHRISTINE!
mel boring scribblegirl needs to find out: I was wondering if you have heard of any issues/problems regarding payment
from an American publisher? I know that ICL has
are submitting to American magazines
mel boring I told scribblegirl that I didn't know of any problems of CANADIAN authors not receiving payment from American publishers...
mel boring but I wanted to ask YOU if YOU knew of any....
mel boring So those of you who are Canadian, and have published in the US and gotten paid--or not--will you please let us know here?
mel boring farmergirl sends these questions: For the past several years our church choir has done Christmas musicals. This year, it was decided that we should "re-visit" some of our favorite songs from the previous five years and find a way to weave it together. I was asked to be the weaver (write the drama). I spent several weeks doing so, and would like to submit this drama for possible future publication.
What are some possibilities for me to research as far as editors? 2) The drama was written to coincide with the songs. Do I have to get permission to list these songs/writers/ arrangers as part of the drama? 3) If so, how do I go about that? FYI The drama includes 13 characters, which are teenager and adult roles
mel boring CONGRATULATIONS, farmergirl on your Drama Weaving!!!...
mel boring What to do to find editors/publishers is to COMB the listings in ICL's...
mel boring CHILDREN'S BOOK MARKET and CHILDREN'S MAGAZINE MARKET and the CHILDREN'S WRITER'S & ILLUSTRATOR'S MARKET from Writer's Digest Magazine...
mel boring and find ANY that want musical drama like yours...
mel boring They may be FEW, but there should be SOME interested....
mel boring Yes, you need to get permission to use the songs in your drama, farmergirl....
mel boring Look at the scores of the music you'll use, and the copyright owners will be listed....
mel boring and probably with their addresses, too. Write and ask permission from them is the way to do it....
mel boring Play publishers that I know usually want plays with FEW characters;...
mel boring but I think a special Christmas production with that many characters should appeal to at least a few publishers. GOOD FORTUNE with yoru project!!!
minkadoo mel boring, I've noticed when submitting, ask for photos or
minkadoo or ill. do send reg. photos or illustrations on side paper
mel boring Hi, minkadoo!...
mel boring Yes, they want regular photos...
mel boring UNLESS they ask for DIGITAL photos....
mel boring MANY publishers are starting to use digitals now,...
mel boring which are so much easier to send, via e-mail...
mel boring But if they want regular photos, usually 5 X 7-inch black and white are best,...
mel boring unless they tell you they have the equipment to use color....
mel boring Put the photos between two stiff cardboards, with the top cardboard's grain running the other way to the bottom cardboard's....
mel boring Wrap two rubber bands around this package, at right angles to each other, and send in a padded envelope....
mel boring As for illustrations, it's USUAL to send only ONE finished illustration on its original paper stock,...
mel boring but SKETCHES only for others with it.
mel boring rls wrote to ask: How can one get started actually working for a publishing house? Maybe as a proofreader, or something along those lines of employment? Is it a norm to work "in house" or are there any
from home? I ask this because
publishing house, and I can't just pick up and move my family
mel boring MOST publishers use IN-HOUSE people to do proofreading and entry-level jobs....
mel boring AND most publishers ARE in large cities....
mel boring so the prospect of getting such a job from afar is small, I''m afraid, rls....
mel boring When those jobs ARE out-of-house, they're usually done by people who at one time worked there IN-house...
mel boring You might look for a SMALL publisher near you,...
mel boring and be prepared to do ANY jobs that come up in that publishing house....
mel boring Usually small publishers have all their employees doing about EVERYthing, rls....
mel boring GOOD LUCK in a difficult job search, and will you let us know how it comes out, please?
mel boring Birdi was inspired by our former discussion to ask this question: On Tuesday October 13th's forum, Crabby J mentioned that she was told that one of the worst mistakes writers make is not learning the non-writing portion of the trade. One example given was billing a company for your work. What other things should we be learning now so that we are prepared for the future? I am sure that many of the ICL students would be happy to know these things now so they are not surprised by them later.
mel boring First, Birdi, there is a certain "writer-editor ediquette (sp?)"...
mel boring that is important. For instance, DON'T send a manuscript by e-mail if the publisher doesn't want it by e-mail....
mel boring Also, don't call an editor by their first name UNLESS they offer for you to do that....
mel boring But CHIEF among the dos/don'ts is basic respect for editors....
mel boring Don't PHONE them, for example, unless they phone first....
mel boring Here is a SECOND area of things to know: CONTRACTS....
mel boring Most writers, when they get their first contract, have never seen one...
mel boring So it's a good idea to FIND sample contracts to see what they look like....
mel boring SOME publishers will even SEND you a sample contract to give you a look....
mel boring And if you know what's coming up in a contract in general, you'll be better prepared....
mel boring You can see some contract samples, I believe, at Harold Underdown's Purple Crayon Web Site....
mel boring Just put in Purple Crayon for search words, and you'll get there easily....
mel boring In FACT, Birdi, there is MUCH at the Purple Crayon Web Site that will teach you the things you asked about, things you should know in dealing with being published.
mel boring iluv2write asks: Is there a correct way in composing a novel outline?
mel boring There is no ONE way to do outlines that is considered THE way by publishers, iluv2write....
mel boring But MOST do not want a "Roman Numeral" outline...
mel boring What is BEST is a SENTENCE OUTLINE...
mel boring That is an outline that presents in short sentences...
mel boring For example, the outline for an article might have one sentence for the introduction:...
mel boring The dodo bird is one of the few extinct birds that people might not want to see come back."...
mel boring That is just off my cuff, but that kind of sentencing....
mel boring Then in the first section of your outline, you could write four to six short sentences that describe what will be in...
mel boring the first chapter of your novel....
mel boring The most important sentences for each chapter will be the BEGINNING and the ENDING of the chapter....
mel boring THINK of a novel outline as a VERY MUCH SHORTENED VERSION of the novel itself....
mel boring You might have, say I'd guess, 20,000 sentences in the novel itself...
mel boring If so, about only TWENTY sentences in the outline would be best, iluv2write.
mel boring MS asked us this question: I recently did an article for an assignment and most of my research was obtained from the internet. I do not always have access to a car and I was wondering if the internet is considered an acceptable source.
mel boring The Internet is NOT a good source for all or even most of your research, MS, I'm afraid....
mel boring That's because (unless you get info from a .org or a .edu site,...
mel boring it's NOT very dependable. Often the info is not signed or dated....
mel boring so editors are VERY SUSPICIOUS of mostly Internet sites,,,,.
mel boring Find some way to get into a car, MS, and go to the library....
mel boring There is NO SUBSTITUTE for books and magazines with information on your subject.
mel boring KL e-mailed from Finland to ask: Being an alumni of ICL from mid 90s I would like to ask your opinion of the following: What is the status of fictitious animal storis for kids aged 4-7 years at this moment among U.S. book publishers? I have written several such stories and found some 5-6 years ago that these topics were not much in demand in the U.S. More emphasis was paid, as I understand it, to the latest techniques and pictures and such stories, and good old-fashioned animal stuff was not so interesting any more. Is the situation still the same?
mel boring Hi, KL!...
mel boring It's probably not that animal stories were not liked for U.S. books,...
mel boring but that books were just not selling well at all...
mel boring And about five or six years ago, the children's book market was soft, books weren't selling well....
mel boring But even at THAT time,animals are THE preferred subject for children, and will always make good submissions, whether books are selling well or poorly...
mel boring Today, the book market is some improved over five to six years ago...
mel boring So animal topic books should sell well, KL!
brenbo Hi, Mel! I saw a 10-year old comic featured on the local
brenbo news about three weeks ago. I'd love to interview him for a
brenbo magazine article, but I've never done interviewed someone
brenbo before. I don't know how to start. How do you approach the
brenbo kid's mother so that they know you are not a predator? It's
brenbo sad that we have to think that way, but it is a concern I
brenbo have.
mel boring Hi, brenbo! I would phone the mother and father, or write them,...
mel boring and simply tell them of your idea and ask their okay....
mel boring You're right, with a child of 10, parents will be worried about...
mel boring adults trying to take advantage of their child....
mel boring So DO approach the parents first. Adk them if you could interview the child--in the parent(s)' presence, of course...
mel boring You may find they are EAGER to have the right kind of publicity,...
mel boring and the kind YOU would do would be the right kind, benevolent and harmless, brenbo. So get to it and do it! And please let us know how it comes out!
mel boring Here's a SUPER suggestion from scribblegirl about contracts:...
scribblegirl "Doesn't the ICL cirriculum provide sample contracts?"
mel boring Yes, they have sample contracts in some of their course materials--GREAT idea, THANKS, scribblegirl!
caq Ris can try local corporations, they do tech manuals for the companies and training books, etc. May use outside proofreaders. Also, a local printing press may have call for some. I used to do a lot for a local corporation from my home, from desktop publishing to typing to proofing.
mel boring EXCELLENT suggestion, caq!...
mel boring Local companies are much more open to this kind of job than huge corporations.
gladys1 Mel if the editor or publisher uses your first name then can you use theirs or do you still use the formal Mr. Ms.
mel boring Yes, you CAN use their first name if they use yours--THAT's a good signal, gladys1.
gladys1 Mel is there a way to include a marketing class with the ICL course
mel boring This is a bit out of my bailiwick, gladys1, but I THINK that the BEYOND THE BASICS course has more time that it devotes to marketing....
mel boring And the PIPELINE TO PUBLISHING course is VERY much about marketing....
mel boring The BEST way to find out about these two courses and what they contain is to e-mail...
mel boring informationservices@institutechildrenslit.com
mel boring THEY have the most ACCURATE info on the courses.
lauriet What about magazines (Cobblestone), that require an outline?
mel boring The outlines for the COBBLESTONE family can STILL be sentence outlines, lauriet,...
mel boring and many of those would still be OK with Roman Numeral outlines....
mel boring What a SENTENCE outline is is really a short precis of what the book or story or article is...,...
mel boring a kind of abbreviation. But I suspect that magazines in the COBBLESTONE group DO get LOTS of Roman Numeral outlines.
mel boring The hour is up already! CAN YOU BELIEVE THAT?!?!...
mel boring THANK YOU for coming today, friends....
mel boring No Thursday evening Chat Guest this week, but next week comes Bruce Coville...
mel boring See you next Tuesday?
eggamy mel please that e-address in your full lights
mel boring Do you mean this one?...
mel boring webeditor@institutechildrenslit.com
mel boring That is MY e-mail address...
gladys1 Thanks Mel
mel boring You are WARMLY WELCOME, gladys1!

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