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Event start time: Tue Oct 04 05:27:42 2005
Event end time: Tue Oct 04 15:04:57 2005


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mel boring This just in from New England Regional Director, SCBWI, via John Prophet:
the online magazine WEE ONES has hired a new poetry editor, Kim Hutmacher. She's active in SCBWI's Illinois region. The WEE ONES submission guidelines page says:
we are accepting poetry to fill each issue.
available months. Poems must be well written
roll off the tongue. Kim Hutmacher says, "I would love
written about in a fresh, fun way! I also enjoy different forms of poetry and hope to share a nice mix with Wee Ones’ readers. Along with traditional rhyme, don’t be afraid to send haiku, acrostic, limericks, or to explore simile and metaphor, etc."
policies, see:
mel boring This just in from New England Regional Director, SCBWI, via John Prophet:
the online magazine WEE ONES has hired a new poetry editor, Kim Hutmacher. She's active in SCBWI's Illinois region. The WEE ONES submission guidelines page says:
we are accepting poetry to fill each issue.
available months. Poems must be well written
roll off the tongue. Kim Hutmacher says, "I would love
written about in a fresh, fun way! I also enjoy different forms of poetry and hope to share a nice mix with Wee Ones’ readers. Along with traditional rhyme, don’t be afraid to send haiku, acrostic, limericks, or to explore simile and metaphor, etc."
policies, see:

mel boring John Prophet also provided this helpful link for us today: In case you haven't visited this site: www.chickensoup.com. Click on Story Guidelines for submissions. THANKS, John!!!
mel boring This just in from New England Regional Director, SCBWI, via John Prophet:
the online magazine WEE ONES has hired a new poetry editor, Kim Hutmacher. She's active in SCBWI's Illinois region. The WEE ONES submission guidelines page says:
we are accepting poetry to fill each issue.
available months. Poems must be well written
roll off the tongue. Kim Hutmacher says, "I would love
written about in a fresh, fun way! I also enjoy different forms of poetry and hope to share a nice mix with Wee Ones’ readers. Along with traditional rhyme, don’t be afraid to send haiku, acrostic, limericks, or to explore simile and metaphor, etc."
policies, see:

mel boring This just in from New England Regional Director, SCBWI, via John Prophet:
the online magazine WEE ONES has hired a new poetry editor, Kim Hutmacher. She's active in SCBWI's Illinois region. The WEE ONES submission guidelines page says:
we are accepting poetry to fill each issue.
available months. Poems must be well written
roll off the tongue. Kim Hutmacher says, "I would love
written about in a fresh, fun way! I also enjoy different forms of poetry and hope to share a nice mix with Wee Ones’ readers. Along with traditional rhyme, don’t be afraid to send haiku, acrostic, limericks, or to explore simile and metaphor, etc."
policies, see:

mel boring Join us this afternoon in the AUDITORIUM-Scheduled Events Room for an "Open Forum" with Web Editor Mel Boring. Mel has published some 25 magazine articles and stories, as well as eight books for the young readers market. He taught writing for 18 years, while being home husband and parent to two of his four children, and doing his own writing. He welcomes your questions on time management, getting started, writer's block, marketing, writing rights, writing earnings, or anything else you'd like to discuss. Bring your QUESTIONS to this open forum-in five minutes.
mel boring The Tuesday afternoon "Open Forum" will begin promptly at 4 Atlantic/CANADA, 3 p.m. Eastern, 2 p.m. Central, 1 p.m. Mountain, and noon Pacific. While you wait for the "Open Forum" to start, feel free to use your ASK A QUESTION button RIGHT BETWEEN THE YELLOW "MAP" AND THE RED QUESTION MARK IN ICHAT to post some questions for the discussion group-two minutes from now.
mel boring Good afternoon! Welcome to this Tuesday afternoon's "Open Forum" session. I'm your moderator, Mel Boring, and the Web Editor for this site. We're back for an informal time of answering any questions you might like to ask, on any subject. So feel free to ask what's on your mind--and I'll tell you what's on mine! First, please read these announcements, then we'll get started….
mel boring IMPORTANT INSTRUCTIONS: Send questions you'd like answered or discussed by using your "Ask a Question" icon/button. (It looks like a thought bubble icon, RIGHT NEXT TO THE RED QUESTION MARK.) The moderator (me, Mel Boring) will post the questions one at a time in the chat room and do my best to answer them. Also note: If you want to make it possible to ask the longest question you can, first type "/ask" (without the quotation marks), then leave one space after the end of "ask", then type as many characters of your question as you can. If your question is not complete, send the second part next, then if necessary the third, etc…
mel boring WARNING: If you don't post anything at all, SOME of you will be bounced off the system in 15 minutes. TO PREVENT THIS, type something (either a question to the moderator or even a private message) every 15 minutes to stay active and remain online.
mel boring First the GOOD NEWS, one item, but it is BIG!...
mel boring Donna Marie West has done it AGAIN, with this GOOD NEWS this week, for the FOURTH WEEK IN A ROW: Well I don't know what I've been doing right lately but I have ANOTHER GOOD NEWS! I just sold "The Bed Bug" to STORY FRIENDS. This is the second publication for this short story as it appeared in OUR LITTLE FRIEND in 2003. Have a good week (I am!)
mel boring CONGRATULATIONS, Donna Marie West--WHAT a TRACK RECORD!...
mel boring I think your writing talent has finally caught up with editors! FOUR sales are FABULOUS!!! WAY TO WRITE RIGHT!
mel boring Here's the FIRST and a most important question, from omalizzie!...
omalizzie has anyone else had trouble getting into the message board
mel boring YES, I have, said Mel! (-:}...
mel boring Yesterday I couldn't get into Writer's Retreat, so I asked our technician to restart the processes in there....
mel boring NOW you can get in, and I'm SORRY, omalizzie and others, for the inconvenience!...
mel boring It's something we do every so seldom, like spring cleaning!
mel boring Here are some important tips that people have sent:...
mel boring This just in from the New England Regional Director, SCBWI, forwarded by John Prophet:
the online magazine WEE ONES has hired a new poetry editor, Kim Hutmacher. She's active in SCBWI's Illinois region. The WEE ONES submission guidelines page says:
we are accepting poetry to fill each issue. Please check below for the available months. Poems must be well written with no forced rhyme and roll off the tongue. Kim Hutmacher says, "I would love to see age appropriate subjects written about in a fresh, fun way! I also enjoy different forms of poetry and hope to share a nice mix with WEE ONES' readers. Along with traditional rhyme, don't be afraid to send haiku, acrostic, limericks, or to explore simile and metaphor, etc. " For full guidelines and payment policies see:

mel boring This means that "you've got a friend in the poety business,"...
mel boring because Kim Hutmacher has published articles on our ICL Web Site!...
mel boring She is so GOOD at poetry, so submit your GOOD poetry to Kim!...
mel boring But make sure it's GOOD, because editors tell me...
mel boring they receive a LOT of BAD poetry, forced rhyming, no natural rhythym, stiffish, and just plain rhyming by writers....
mel boring who think that just because they can come up with a word that rhymes with another one before it,...
mel boring it's poetry, but mostly it's doggerel!...
mel boring Here's a place to see some GOOD poetry: On the inside front cover of each HIGHLIGHTS Magazine--they pick one of the BEST!
mel boring Now, here,...
mel boring caq has this good follow-up question: Thursday, Mary Casanova said she has two rhyming dictionaries. Can you
Here are Mary's answers from the transcript of her chat:
dictionaries: THE COMPLETE RHYMING DICTIONARY (1992) by Clement Wood, and the SCHOLASTIC RHYMING DICTIONARY (1997) by Sue Young, each of which is available in paperback for about eight dollars from http://www.amazon.com. There is an online rhyming dictionary at http://www.rhymezone.com/ at the RhymeZone Web Site, where you can find rhyming words of a certain number of syllables as well. There is another simpler online rhyming dictionary on the WriteExpress Web Site, at http://www.writeexpress.com/online2.html
mel boring I'll make sure these titles and such come out clearly in the transcript! And THANKS for asking, caq!
mel boring John Prophet also provided this helpful link for us today: In case you haven't visited this site:
for submissions. THANKS, John
mel boring Publishing in CHICKEN SOUP would be a real coupe...
mel boring For youpe! WHOOPS, doggerel! Sorry!!!
mel boring Chitra Soundar KINDly sent us this information about book packagers: Many people often wonder about what book packagers do. As a SCBWI Assistant Advisor, I was asked this question this week again. Here are the articles I sent to the member.
creat books for publishers. Here are some interesting articles on this part of the industry:



mel boring THANK YOU so MUCH, Chitra!!! Chitra has been published on our ICL Web Site...
mel boring and she has been VERY helpful to children's writers in her Assistant Advisor for SCBWI in Singapore.
mel boring Again, people have asked about the HIGHLIGHTS FOR CHILDREN "Wish List," and Helen Henderson was SO kind to send us that Wish List, which we've posted here previously. If you want to get a copy of that HIGHLIGHTS Wish List, send an e-mail to George Brown, who is an editor at the magazine. His e-mail address is:

mel boring Here is a question about HIGHLIGHTS from arnalda:...
mel boring arnalda e-mailed to ask: Do you know to whom should I submit poems to at HIGHLIGHTS FOR CHILDREN?
mel boring I suggest you submit your poems to just the Poetry Editor at HIGHLIGHTS, arnalda....
mel boring They don't HAVE a particular poetry editor--ALL their editors look at it,...
mel boring but if you address the "Poetry Editor," they will know JUST how to direct your submissions! We'll be looking for you on their inside front cover, friend!
leone How do you switch between past and present tense without confusing readers?
mel boring GOOD question, leone! Actually, a story or a book is usually kept in ONE main tense, usually PAST TENSE but sometimes PRESENT TENSE....
mel boring When you DO switch, say from the present the story/novel is happening in, to the past when something of significance happened,...
mel boring it's called a flashback. And it's very important to go into any flashback CLEARLY, letting readers know you are referring to what's already happened in the flashback...
mel boring Then it's just as important to come OUT of a flashback--keep them short!--clearly, letting readers know you're returning to when the story IS happening....
mel boring But you would NOT switch tenses as in writing:...
mel boring Jennica turned the corner and started for her house. Then she sees her best friend....
mel boring The mixture of the PAST tense "turned" and the PRESENT tense "sees" is not done....
mel boring If you were going into a flashback, however, you might do it like this:...
mel boring Jennica was just turning into her driveway when that horrible accident from two years ago came back to her....
mel boring Then you would go into what happened in the PAST in the accident flashback....
mel boring At the END of the flashback, to come back to the present time the story is taking place in,...
mel boring you might write:...
mel boring "Come right in the house, Jennica!" called her mother, jerking her back to the now.
george kulz An update on my Spider experiences. I'm slated to be in a
george kulz 2007 issue
mel boring That is MARVELOUS, george!!! THANKS for telling us!!!...
mel boring I know it always seems forever till they FINALLY schedule your submission, doesn't it!...
mel boring However, I've known a piece of mine to take FIVE YEARS to get into CRICKET MAGAZINE, so yours happened pretty fast....
mel boring Do I remember that you just sold them that manuscript about a year ago last spring?
dianna wee ones was my very first sale, several years ago
mel boring CONGRATULATIONS, dianna, I think I remember that great event!
dell Mel, I have more good news, I just heard (about an hour ago) from publicity person at my publisher and they'll be sending my book and a press release to the top 100 newspapers in the country. This is all so new to me, and very exciting!
mel boring Dell has a picture book out, and NOW this GOOD NEWS!!!...
mel boring CONGRATULATIONS, Dell! That is so exciting--and for US here, too!...
mel boring It sounds like your publisher is doing WELL at promotion, Dell!...
mel boring SOMEtimes, even "big publishers" fall down in promotion,...
mel boring and THAT is what will make your book GO!!! We wish you WELLER THAN WELL, our friend!
caq I would just suggest that you all look at WVStorytellers post in the General discussion board. It is so funny. It is titled Read it and laugh.
mel boring I will look at that after the forum, thanks for the tipoff, caq! Now here's a lengthy question from caq. I'll try to get it all viewably on the screen!...
caq I submitted a story to Read, part of the Weekly Reader ...
caq family. Saturday I received Freelance Writer’s Guidelines..
caq from Know Your World Extra, another part of the Weekly ...
caq Reader family. I have never sent anything to Know ...
caq Your World Extra. In the upper left hand corner of this...
caq paper there is handwriting. It says: Thank you for your ...
caq interest. Feel free to email me any questions or pitches....
caq Then I was given the email address and it was signed, ...
caq Jeff Ives, Associate Editor. Could the Read part of ...
caq Weekly Reader have sent my story to Know Your World ...
caq Extra (different age group) and Jeff Ives have liked my ...
caq writing style or just sent him a note about it? I have ...
caq heard neither acceptance nor rejection on my submission...
caq to Read. I do have an article I can adjust to fit Know ..
caq Your World Extra and intend to do just that. Sorry for ...
caq the lengthy question, but that is what happened.
mel boring Yes, I think you're absolutely right, caq!...
mel boring Your submission was passed on to KNOW YOUR WORLD EXTRA,...
mel boring and Jeff Ives saw something he really liked in your writing!...
mel boring So DO RIGHT AWAY submit something else to KNOW YOUR WORLD EXTRA, because the WEEKLY READER family is VERY prestigious publishing, friend! ...
mel boring And let us know what happens when you submit to Jeff Ives, OK?
arnalda Ha! Thanks, Mel!
mel boring You are WARMLY WELCOME, arnalda--you are ALWAYS such a cheerful bright spot!
monkee Any reps from IOCL going to Surrey International Writer's Conference in Canada?
mel boring I wish I were, monkee! THANKS for asking, and I'll pass on anyone's message who wants to go!
dell Mel, I guess this is for reviews and inclusion in gift-giving guides, etc.
mel boring Yes, it is, Dell, and notifying the newspapers is for a...
mel boring general coverage of the country with news of your new book....
mel boring Local merchants will know of your book, and be able to stock it,...
mel boring and parents will know of it, too, and be able to buy it.
ccollier Hi Mel, Has anyone received the new 2006 ICL market book yet
mel boring No, ccollier, I haven't yet...
mel boring And you'd think because I'm a "B" that I'd be early,...
mel boring even earlier than you "Cs," ccollier!...
mel boring Has ANYone received their 2006 ICL Market Books yet, the magazine or the books book? Let me know, if so,
mel boring and I'll let others know it's on the way!
razberry Are Animals ok.?
mel boring razberry, ANIMALS are about the BEST ONE TOPIC you can write about for chidren!...
mel boring Things like dinosaurs, and like hula hoops, and like bungee cords, come and go...
mel boring but ANIMALS are here to stay!...
mel boring MORE magazine and book publishers are interested in animal topics than ANY OTHER TOPIC, friend. So write for it!
dianna a dinosaur using a hoola hoop while dangling from a bungee cord?..........hmmm
mel boring What a GREAT idea, dianna!!! Write for it!
mel boring Here
mel boring is some GOOD WISDOM about verb tense, which we talked about earlier, from casey:...
casey when my story was accepted by BTP for Summer Shorts, the editor wanted me to change it to present tense. I'd never written in present tense before so it was a learning experience.
mel boring It was Judy Blume who pretty much FIRST popularized PRESENT tense writing, in the...
mel boring 1960s. Before that, there were a few, but Judy made a specialty of it, and a VERY SUCCESSFUL one!
mel boring INTERESTING insight, casey, THANKS for sharing that!
ccollier Thanks Mel, I see the news ones are advertised online!
mel boring OOPS, now why didn't I think to look there, on our OWN Web Site! GOOFY ME!
mel boring Thanks, ccollier!
mel boring I want to share a personal experience from when I was in Salt Lake City, Utah at a conference of the League of Utah Writers in September:...
mel boring While there, I met only the SECOND chatster from this Web Site that I've ever met, Becky Crum....
mel boring Becky has published on our ICL Web Site, and now we've met, and become good friends....
mel boring What I didn't realize was that dianna--who is here TODAY--was at or near the conference at the Hilton in SLC...
mel boring She was at a Sci-Fi Writers Conference. I ALMOST got to meet dianna, and how I WISHED I had seen her, and met her!....
mel boring "Moral of this story":..
mel boring If I ever come near where you live, I would LOVE to meet you, friend, so DO flag me down if you see me! And dianna, I'll be back in SLC someday, and I will make it a POINT to meet you, friend!
mel boring GS asked some time ago, the original question that brought about our discussion of historical fiction last week: How much "fact" do you need to have in historical fiction? I wanted to do an article on Calamity Jane helping with the smallpox epidemic in Deadwood in 1878 but could not find enough information to do the nonfiction article. In the CHILDREN'S WRITER Newsletter it tells of writing historical fiction. I now want to do a story about Calamity Jane and a child she befriended that had smallpox. There isn't much about that part of her life, only a line or two. Enough for a lead, but not the article. What do you suggest?
mel boring Here is what I suggest, GS:...
mel boring If you DIG HARD ENOUGH, LONG ENOUGH, AND IN ENOUGH PLACES,...
mel boring you CAN come up with more info about Calamity Jane and that Deadwood smallpox epidemic....
mel boring I have found that NO subject, no matter how LITTLE material there is about it, can't be researched.....
mel boring If you go to libraries BIG and SMALL, go to COLORADO if you can,....
mel boring and SEARCH like you were searching for gold, you WILL FIND info, because...
mel boring that event HAPPENED, GS, and there is BOUND to be more info, maybe old books, magazines....
mel boring But I suggest you find the BEST reference librarian at the biggest university library you can,...
mel boring and ask them to help you find out about Calamity Jane in the 1878 smallpox epidemic,...
mel boring because it's OUT THERE, friend, it just needs to be found....
mel boring And you wouldn't have to fictionalize it, because it REALLY HAPPENED, and fact is always stranger than fiction! So GO FOR IT, GS!
mel boring VLP needs to know: I was wondering when you want to submit a query to a certain publisher, but they are asking for clips with the query, is it alright to include a paragraph or two of your article if you do not have any clips?
mel boring I wouldn't include a paragraph or two of the article, VLP,...
mel boring but I would give them a "teaser" from your article....
mel boring And in ONLY one paragraph. Here's a for instance:...
mel boring In one paragraph of a query letter, I might write (and prolly the FIRST paragraph)...
mel boring "In 1878, only 29 people died of smallpox in Cripple Creek, Colorado,...
mel boring but 1674 cows and 5639 chickens and 5643 pigs dies of the smallpox."...
mel boring Of course, what I've just written is NOT TRUE,...
mel boring but I would use what FACTS there ARE to arrest the editor's attention....
mel boring Then in the second paragraph I would give the editor some info about the article such as the age, length, and any other "structural" characteristics...
mel boring Then in the THIRD and LAST paragraph, ask the editor if they would like to see the complete article.
mel boring I hope this helps, VLP, but what I'm trying to show is that the...
mel boring QUERY is CRUCIAL! You may never get a chance to show your article if the query doesn't arrest the editor. So ROUSE that editor, make them BEG to see the article!
mel boring YA needs to find out: I am a second year sixth grade teacher at a public school and I am very interested in writing picture books for children. I wrote a picture book for a Graduate course, I received an A+. What would be my first step in order to

omalizzie what is the difference between a story and an essay?
eggamy thanks for highlight info. mel. Could you please give Cobble
eggamy Cobblestone address too my e-mail hasn't been on I've missed
mel boring WHOOPS, too many at once!...
mel boring First, omalizzie, a story has a beginning and an end, a conflict that gets "worser," then is resolved....
mel boring An essay is OPINION about something, not a story....
mel boring In our Writer's News each week, I write an ESSAY with the title THE WRITE LIFE....
mel boring THOSE are just MY feelings, MY opinions, omalizzie....
mel boring But a story has limited characters, and one main, POV character, who sets about resolving the conflict, which is done by the end.
mel boring eggamy, the COBBLESTONE address is:...
mel boring Carus Publishing Company, 140 S. Dearborn #1450, Chicago, IL 60603....
mel boring Writing to COBBLESTONE in care of that Carus address will get to COBBLESTONE, eggamy.
mel boring MC sent this question: I recently read an interview of the president of Peru. He has had a fascinating, rags-to-riches life, and I think it would make a great children's article or book. How do I appropriately get permission to use the info and possibly the photos? Could the author and I collaborate?
mel boring If the information was published, you don't NEED to ask permission, MC. ...
mel boring You may use the info--though not copy it word for word---because it is published....
mel boring If you plan to quote more than 50 words of a source, then you must get permission....
mel boring As for the photos, YES, you do need to ask permission to use them, always....
mel boring The SOURCE of a photo is usually printed somewhere near it in a "credit line," and that tells you who to contact....
mel boring As for collaboration, contact the author and ask, it's that simple....
mel boring And a writer once contacted me and asked if we could collaborate, and we DID, very HAPPILY! So go for it, MC!
mel boring MC also has this question: I've written a lot of materials that are good for teaching ESL. Much of it is action songs. Other teachers in my district use my units. The kids love them. But breaking into the music world seems really difficult. Plus, I
concert/have your own CD-making-studio thing. Any advice
mel boring Get a marketing guide, like the 2006 CHILDREN"S BOOK MARKET or the CHILDREN"S WRITERS AND ILLUSTRATORS' MARKET, MC,...
mel boring and look through it for the FEW publishers who do music and CDs. They are there, and can be found!
mel boring I'm not much for selling things, MC, but the ICL market guides are at:...
mel boring http://www.writersbookstore.com/Books_on_Writing_for_Children.htm
mel boring And the CHILDREN'S WRITERS' AND ILLUSTRATORS' MARKET is found at:...
mel boring http://www.amazon.com/exec/obidos/tg/detail/-/1582970742/103-2338485-9352621?v=glance
mel boring THAT is the OLD 2002 book, but the newest one can be found through there at amazon.
mel boring BW wants to ask this question: If I
sell a story to a magazine - do I have to declare it as income? Is there a dollar amount you have to earn before declaring the money
mel boring Yes, it is income, and if your full-time job is NOT writing,...
mel boring you just declare it as extra income, and the publisher will send you the IRS form to use for that....
mel boring If you DO make your living as a writer, you not only list the INCOMES, but the DEDUCTUIONS for expenses, BW. And let us know when you DO sell, friend!
mel boring I must go, I'm overtime again! THANKS for being here, and for being YOU!!!...
mel boring YOU are a GOOD YOU, and I'll look forward to seeiung you here again next Tuesday, OK?

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